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Vasant Nath's avatar

Such a lovely collection and such a lovely introduction. I enjoyed it so much that I feel that the click bait title doesn’t do it justice!

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Kamna Kirti's avatar

Did you find the title clickbaity? Well, it wasn't intentional for sure :P

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Vasant Nath's avatar

I’m sure it was unintended. I think the title can draw more from the focus of your post. Will think and share more tomorrow.

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Vasant Nath's avatar

Hi Kamna. Re read the post and the title: I conclude that you do well to keep the titles simple and the content rich and layered. Perhaps a few words to compliment ‘fixated’? It wasn’t just the beauty of the paintings that hooked me but the expressions on the central womens’ faces.

Again - I think I’m just splitting hairs having read too many suggestions at the bottom of Indian websites inviting me in by saying things like “this Mumbai-ite’s way to make quick cash will leave you stunned!”:)

I guess such a turn of phrase is rampant because it’s effective. Forgive me if ‘click bait’ sounded reductive in any way. Was not intended so

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Kamna Kirti's avatar

Of course not Vasant. I'm already stoked getting feedback from you and I mean it.

On the other note, when I started my YouTube, I watched this video by Veritasium. I'd highly recommend it to you if you haven't watched it.

https://youtu.be/S2xHZPH5Sng

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